10 Mar


photo by Samuel Zeller

“Why would I ever consider leaving Tim?” Anna was staring to her brother’s eyes and kept asking him this question over and over.

“Because this is not a healthy relationship, Anna. For Christ’s sake, he is a criminal! He can get you in some trouble! And now you are even planning to run away with him? Police is searching for him! When will you open your eyes and see that this is dangerous?”

“He is the love of my life. I can’t leave him. I am going with him.” Anna was determined. She was looking at her brother’s face trying to memorize every feature of it. She knew this was the last time they saw each other. They were sitting in a cafe with beautiful view to the cathedral. A perfect place for a goodbye.

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14 Responses to “Farewell”

  1. Sonya at 11:13 am #

    How sad – I hope she’s not making a massive mistake. It is a good place for a goodbye, though… Thanks for taking part in TLT again 🙂

    • artisticsmash at 11:20 am #

      Yes, great place with a great view 🙂 Sometimes we are learning from our mistakes even the hard way :(…Thank you for these great inspirational posts 🙂

      • Sonya at 11:22 am #

        my pleasure, great you like them 🙂

  2. jacquelineobyikocha at 11:16 am #

    Big mistake! !

    • artisticsmash at 11:21 am #

      I know! You can feel that she is heading to trouble, right? 🙂 Thanks for reading!

      • jacquelineobyikocha at 6:19 pm #

        It’s a pleasure. I feel that she will regret that move.

      • artisticsmash at 6:20 pm #

        I guess she knew it as well when she was saying goodbye to her brother. 🙂

  3. Lynn Love at 1:09 pm #

    How some girls love a bad boy! And this story has car crash wating to happen all over it. Nice take on the prompt – great writing

  4. rosemawrites at 9:46 am #

    Oh. I hope she made the right choice. (Though I think she didn’t.)

    • artisticsmash at 10:01 am #

      Well, love can be strong, but love can be blind in the same time :/

      • rosemawrites at 10:02 am #

        That is true. And this one is a blond love. -_-


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