17 May

Deep wide ocean surounds me
and I breath that fresh air,
deep into my lungs.

This is my personal world,
my private Idaho.
Too small boat you’d think,
but it is the biggest boat,
that I’ve ever bern on.

Birds flying around me.
I am finally free,
this is my Utopia.
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3 Responses to “Utopia”

  1. jademwong May 19, 2016 at 12:40 am #

    Lovely, and nicely written. I like the simplicity of the poem.

  2. Susan Langer May 20, 2016 at 1:23 am #

    Utopia indeed. Well written. 🙂

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